year:年齡與「第幾年」是錯一年的#

你永遠比實際年齡多一年正在度過。

  • 新生兒:在「第一年」
  • 過完第一個生日:開始「第二年」
  • 五十週年那天:完成「第五十年」、進入「第五十一年」

布萊森舉例:

  • 錯:the car… has reached its fiftieth year(車子過五十歲生日時)
  • 對:has completed its fiftieth yearhas reached its fifty-first

years’ time 是冗詞#

years 已含「時間」之意,不必加 time

  • 冗:Britain would run out of coal in a few years’ time.
  • 簡:…in a few years.

yes / no 引用的標點#

報導他人回答時,yes / no 有兩種正確處理方式:

  • 全部小寫不加引號:Blake Edwards says no.
  • 用引號標出:*Blake Edwards says, ‘No.’*

不要寫成 *Blake Edwards says No*(首字大寫但無引號)——這種折衷既不像直接引語也不像間接引語,不三不四。

yesterday:時間副詞的位置#

報紙寫作常見奇句——把時間副詞硬塞在 be 動詞與分詞之間:

  • 鬆散:The announcement was yesterday greeted with restrained enthusiasm.
  • 自然:The announcement was greeted yesterday with restrained enthusiasm.

只要不會造成歧義,多半能找到更自然的位置。

you who is:單複數的奇例#

you 常作單數使用,但永遠搭配複數動詞(you are)。

但在某些子句中,you who is… 反而是文法正確:

例:it will be you who is liable to the rancher for the cost

雖然合法,但讀起來怪。布萊森建議改寫:

  • you may be held liable
  • legal liability will rest with you