year:年齡與「第幾年」是錯一年的#
你永遠比實際年齡多一年正在度過。
- 新生兒:在「第一年」
- 過完第一個生日:開始「第二年」
- 五十週年那天:完成「第五十年」、進入「第五十一年」
布萊森舉例:
- 錯:the car… has reached its fiftieth year(車子過五十歲生日時)
- 對:has completed its fiftieth year 或 has reached its fifty-first
years’ time 是冗詞#
years 已含「時間」之意,不必加 time。
- 冗:Britain would run out of coal in a few years’ time.
- 簡:…in a few years.
yes / no 引用的標點#
報導他人回答時,yes / no 有兩種正確處理方式:
- 全部小寫不加引號:Blake Edwards says no.
- 用引號標出:*Blake Edwards says, ‘No.’*
不要寫成 *Blake Edwards says No*(首字大寫但無引號)——這種折衷既不像直接引語也不像間接引語,不三不四。
yesterday:時間副詞的位置#
報紙寫作常見奇句——把時間副詞硬塞在 be 動詞與分詞之間:
- 鬆散:The announcement was yesterday greeted with restrained enthusiasm.
- 自然:The announcement was greeted yesterday with restrained enthusiasm.
只要不會造成歧義,多半能找到更自然的位置。
you who is:單複數的奇例#
you 常作單數使用,但永遠搭配複數動詞(you are)。
但在某些子句中,you who is… 反而是文法正確:
例:it will be you who is liable to the rancher for the cost
雖然合法,但讀起來怪。布萊森建議改寫:
- you may be held liable
- legal liability will rest with you